Camp Storyboard/Animatic is up!

Well, a day over a week since i told myself I would be done storyboarding the animation, I'm finally... kind of... finished. I'm still missing an ending, but I figured I just need to get animating before I let this thing drag on too long. I'm still basically teaching myself to draw beyond characters in blank space, so there was some unexpected puzzle-solving I had to do. So anyway, here's an extremely rough version (both in animation and quality. I need to figure out how to put Quicktime files up.) of what I intend to do. I have some notes below it.

Notes:

1. When I was creating the fire circle, I basically fell in love with Mopey Camper (on the far left). I'm seriously considering putting him in the place of Happy Camper on the far right, since he's more interesting, and there would probably be a more interesting emotional change.

2. I will make the archery target more three-dimensional for the real thing, as you can see, there are many parts of this where I was kind of rushing.

3. I totally messed up the perspective in the pool shot. It looks like a vast Olympic-size pool instead of a camp swimming pool, and the lifeguard, and more importantly the lifesaver, are too small.

4. I will probably add someone (Ropes staff) onto the platform in the tree.

5. Okay, the kid falling behind in the Run and Scream shot looks like a retard.

6. I don't know why I put space between the initial four kids in the Nature shot, since the whole point is that they crowd around.

7. Yes, there will be an ending, but this is almost the whole thing anyway.

I'm deciding between animating from beginning to end or in order of ostensive (sic?) difficulty. Either way, I need to start... tonight.